High Expectations

From one of my students (my brightest) who thinks she is not meeting my high expectations (I got this in my email about 5 minutes ago)

Hello Mr.Street,thank you for the extra homework that you gave me to accomplish.I hope that this that extra homework helps me get a 4 on my writing.I also hope that everybody gets a 4 on their writing assingment.I know that you were mad with me because I overused the word "said",but I hope that The work helps me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!